I agree that we need more of a back story, which is kind of what i was requesting in my second to last post. However, i dont agree about only V'Lora being involved, and T'Lara wouldnt follow her at all. I think you might be confused that V'Lora is the captain? The "captain" i intend to lea...

So, I am of course looking for feedback and suggestions for changing the story. It isnt written in stone at all. What I would really like is assistance in writing an intro story, or a chapter that comes before this one which explains a falling out between the captain and his commanding officer. I wo...

Rough Introduction: My goal is to create a realistic, more adult trek story. I also wanted to try to create something more cannon and with less U.S.S. Make Shit Up. Rough Basic Outline: Captain of a shitty science vessel not affiliated with Starfleet, current crew complement: Dren, Six, V’Lora and ...

Hey guys, This work in progress has been slowly developing in my mind before i slumber each night, but recently made its way out of my butt crack and onto my computer. After the rather exciting responses I got from certain members including but not limited to Bel, I decided to share this extremely r...